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Come undone; Come unhinged

by Venky

Treating agony and ecstasy in a manner that would have made Kipling proud

Viewing both misery and munificence as siblings of a passing cloud;

With a demeanour so incredible and an attitude indefatigable

 He never viewed any situation as one that was insurmountable or insoluble


But love finally ensured that the poor man came unhinged

One who was hitherto courageous and determined sadly brooded and cringed;

The remorseless and unsparing hand of Cupid which once seemed so pure and pious

Shattered a man who once proudly deemed himself from all emotions, to be impervious

Love vile and devious


(Word Count: 99)

Courtesy of Sammi Cox Weekend Writing Prompt#98

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Violet Lentz March 25, 2019 - 1:33 pm

What a beautiful piece of poetry! Not at all what I was expecting when I came here.. Thank you, Venky.

venkyninja1976 March 25, 2019 - 1:37 pm

Thank you so much! It is encouragement like this that keeps me going!

crimsonprose March 25, 2019 - 2:19 pm

Oh, you’ve got some wonderfully toe-tingling words here. 🙂


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