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Mr.Francesco’s Altar of Peace

by Venky

(Photo Credit: Rochelle Wisoff-Fields)

Parking his gleaming Maserati in an alley abutting an alcove of randomly positioned trees, Francesco strode purposefully towards the neglected and isolated stone structure. Before entering he paused before a gnarled tree. Running his palms slowly against its rough bark, he felt his eyes moisten. Once inside, he stared at the picture of the old gardener nailed to the wall.

Falling on his knees, he allowed himself to be racked by sobs as he remembered his God who had gently carried the wailing baby abandoned under the shade of the tree outside into this very house 67 years ago.

(Word Count: 99)

This story was written as part of the FRIDAY FICTIONEERS challenge, more about which may be found HERE

 For the complete list of entries, please click HERE

The credit for the breathtaking photograph goes to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

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17 comments

Dale October 10, 2018 - 7:01 pm

That was beautiful, Venky

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venkyninja1976 October 10, 2018 - 11:53 pm

Thank you so much Dale!

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granonine October 10, 2018 - 9:40 pm

A touching tale. It is good to see a grateful character.

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Abhijit Ray October 11, 2018 - 4:09 am

Very touching. Remembering someone who save him at the beginning of his life. It is an emotional moment.

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jillyfunnell October 11, 2018 - 8:32 am

Beautiful story of the good and kindly gardener. Lovely “ah” moment at the close.

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venkyninja1976 October 11, 2018 - 9:13 am

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it.

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Dahlia October 11, 2018 - 1:12 pm

A heartwarming tale of goodness in the world

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venkyninja1976 October 11, 2018 - 1:59 pm

Thanks much!

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JoHawkTheWriter October 11, 2018 - 5:22 pm

What a beautiful story. Nicely done.

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venkyninja1976 October 12, 2018 - 12:22 am

Thank you so much!

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Sascha Darlington October 12, 2018 - 1:13 am

A beautiful, very feeling story.

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Jelli October 12, 2018 - 1:57 pm

That was beyond beautiful! That was a tribute to decency and honor… beautifully written! 🙂 <3

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venkyninja1976 October 12, 2018 - 3:21 pm

Thank you so much for your magnificent words!

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subroto October 12, 2018 - 11:27 pm

Saved and nurtured by the gardner. Nice one.

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venkyninja1976 October 13, 2018 - 6:43 am

Thanks much!

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lisarey1990 October 14, 2018 - 8:26 pm

Very beautiful!

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venkyninja1976 October 15, 2018 - 12:53 am

Thank you so much!

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