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The Ash Effect

by Venky

(Photo by Arun Sharma on Unsplash)

The heat in the room was oppressive. The window – which in reality was more a porthole than its conventional cousin – was sealed shut. The Air Conditioning duct was not humming. Venky suspected that the turning off of the Air Conditioner might have been a deliberate ploy. “Make the suspect as uncomfortable as he possibly can feel.” This was after all an interrogation chamber and not an idyllic resort.

Soon, a man clad in a pinstripe suit and shuffling a sheaf of papers purposefully strode into the room. Placing the folder on the small round table, he briskly produced a pack of cigarettes and proceeded to light one. He ignored Venky’s pointed glance towards the No Smoking sign on the wall.

“Now for the last time did you hit the man on the head with the floorboard?”

“Yes. I did indeed. I have already confessed before.” Venky was composed.


“Because he tried to assault Ash.” Venky’s voice now had a tinge of fury as he recollected the sequence of eventful events.

“Remind me what does this Ash mean to you?”

Unblinkingly staring straight into the eyes of the man, through a swirl of smoke, Venky replied, “My Life.”

(Word Count: 200)

Written as part of Sunday Photo Fiction. Write a story of around 200 words based on the photo prompt given (above). Hosted by Donna McNicol . For more details visit HERE

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crimsonprose July 21, 2019 - 10:26 pm

He said, vehemently. Like it. Again.

venkyninja1976 July 21, 2019 - 11:13 pm

Indeed! You hammered the nail on it’s head!

crimsonprose July 21, 2019 - 11:15 pm

Well that has to be a first. Usually the hammer hits my finger. I’m not much good at DIY! 🙂 🙂 🙂

venkyninja1976 July 21, 2019 - 11:51 pm

That makes the two of us!

crimsonprose July 22, 2019 - 12:01 am


DB McNicol July 21, 2019 - 11:21 pm

Ah, another good one!

venkyninja1976 July 21, 2019 - 11:52 pm

Thanks Much!

bearmkwa July 22, 2019 - 7:16 am

Great story!

venkyninja1976 July 22, 2019 - 7:53 am

Thanks Much!

Lakshmi Bhat July 23, 2019 - 10:50 pm

Well written.

venkyninja1976 July 23, 2019 - 10:54 pm

Thanks Much!


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