(Photo Credit: Dawn M. Miller)
The piercing shriek of the engine lingered for a few fleeting seconds even after the train disappeared into the tunnel. The rock formations abutting the track were brooding sentinels in steel Grey. Venky stood on the platform staring vacantly at the long winding tracks.
“Patience is the precursor to love. Foolishness is the virtue of commitment.” Ash’s words reverberated in his ears. It was a year since she had relocated.
He was a soul searcher; a back-packer in pursuit of a purpose. He was twenty minutes away from springing a surprise on her.
Love was at a crossroad.
(Word Count: 98)
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The credit for the breathtaking photograph goes to Dawn M. Miller
14 comments
Hope it would be a pleasant surprise for her.
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Indeed. Hope springs eternal.
Nicely atmospheric
He’s a determined young man. Let’s hope that the surprise is something she welcomes.
Hope it’s a lovely surprise.
Love at the crossroads – such a great concept.
Thanks much!
Ah, the possibilities! Nicely written 🙂
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Is Ash unlikely to be surprised by Venky’s appearance? Why is love at crossroad?
Did she always talk in such a roundabout fashion – why couldn’t she just say ‘goodbye’? I hope the visit turns out well for them.
She was undecided I suppose although she saw all the merits in him as a trusted person.
L O V E it.. Hope she is receptive at this juncture in her life..
Thanks Much! Glad you liked it!